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C&C time! - Old Captain Silver - 06-04-2006
Could I get some C&C on my fight with Koola? And I'm sure the changeling wouldn't mind some C&C for his stuff either.
KOOLA VS SILVER!
Thanks in advance
C&C time! - Old Captain Silver - 06-07-2006
bump
C&C time! - Ander - 06-08-2006
Patience is a virtue.
Frozen Darkness just turned into shit during D.A., didn't it? Damn.
First of all, I've never read any of Koola's stuff, and Silver has done a complete 180 from when I last commented on his writing, so forgive my lack of insight.
To be blunt, these spirits or whatever in your weapons are irritating. I can't explain why, but I really, really hate them. That takes away about eighty percent of my interest right there. Since it is your prerogative, you both keep on truckin' with that idea, but I personally don't like it and recommend you do something else.
KOOLA:
I am disappointed you went into that wanting to lose. Knowing you're going to lose and actually wanting to lose are two completely different things. I am baffled as to why you would ever want to lose a death match aside from obvious reasons. Aside from that, your character's affinity to water is awesome. That was probably my favorite part was mentally watching that unfold.
SILVER:
Your portrayal of anger was very well done. You have improved since the last time I critiqued. While you may have jumped from one cliche to another, you are getting to be a better writer.
C&C time! - Ander - 06-08-2006
Not saying you're splitting up at all. It's just that you guys are on the ropes with each other right now.
C&C time! - Old Captain Silver - 06-08-2006
Yeah, the spirits have a purpose, though that purpose will not show itself for a little. And yes our allaince is on the ropes, but that will hopefully change.
Thank you for the C&C Bardock, its much appreciated
and which anger part were you refereing to. There was lots >.<