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Hollow!!!111 - Sage - 06-10-2006
The RP
I'd like a bit of C&C. It's the first time I've ever tried something so... dark.
I hope I pulled it off. Whaddya think?
Hollow!!!111 - Kaden - 06-10-2006
*emocut*
Hollow!!!111 - Sage - 06-10-2006
Yeah, great. C&C that doesn't suck would be welcome, too.
Hollow!!!111 - Kaden - 06-10-2006
Hey now, that's perfectly constructive. You just have to read between the lines.
Obviously, I meant your RP was dark enough not only to drive me into starting an emophage DJ, but also starting cutting myself.
Hollow!!!111 - Banned Dana - 06-11-2006
=O that was dark, good job.
I like how she's lost and confused, but at the same time, so sure of herself. She seems fragile and strong at the same time...I actually felt bad for her.
Keep it up, seriously, that's a side that I've never seen written before, or at least, written well.
Hollow!!!111 - Sage - 06-11-2006
Thanks, dude.
Much obliged.
Hollow!!!111 - Ander - 06-13-2006
This is something of a different side of Bra, and yet you still remain very grounded in the character you've established. She is incredibly manic, the kind that makes you step back and say, 'Whoa.'
While it may be dark like you say, it's a completely legitimate reaction to the things that have happened. I like the carry-over you keep using of Raditzu's behavior rubbing off on Bra, and she keeps correcting herself. It's a slow integration of change, but a funny one.
In summation, a good read as always. Way to work the empathy factor.
Hollow!!!111 - Sage - 06-14-2006
Wow. Awesome. Thanks very much, Bar.