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Yummy - Rem-13 - 07-04-2006
So I was trying to RP, but I couldn't force it out. This has happened alot lately. Then inexpicably I type, "In autumn the black bird flies." I look at it and type a second line and a third. This is what happened. Read it at a slow pace.
In autumn the black bird flies,
Leaves behind the dying tree.
Its wings beating to hearts of millions,
A feather falls,
A heart is broken.
The Sun frowns on the twisted tree,
Its apples wrinkled and brown.
It offers light
the leaves turn away,
they run away.
A final withered apple falls.
A heart is broken.
A child sits under the tree.
The apple falls in his lap,
The boy lifts the apple to the sky,
Examines it in a halo of light,
He grins,
Takes a bite,
And rises.
A heart beats on.
I dunno. Strange how I didn't even have to think about what I was writing. It was fun though and a wierd expirience so I thought I'd share it.
No critique though. I don't pretend to be a poet. I know its not good.
Yummy - Android-18 - 07-04-2006
It was beautiful.