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Finally I get to post. - Mal Nova - 07-28-2006
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/thread.php?sid=&postid=251716#post251716
I'm a little iffy on my writing still. Can I get some C&C on it?
Finally I get to post. - Kazuya - 08-13-2006
First off, wow. I don't know why, but before this post, I haven't really been interested in reading your roleplays, but this one kinda caught my attention. How do you say it, a jewel in the sands of the desert? Nicely done. I love the way you do Retane, as some kind of assassin/merc. Your descriptions are beautiful.
Quote:Originally posted by Retane
"Those in Heaven wish to see the race live, and those in Hell wish to see more victims", continued the archangel,
Very nicely put. As I've noticed throughout the roleplay, however, and this is me being nitpicky, but when you do speech, put the punctuation (in this case, the comma) inside the quotations, instead of outside of it. Its grammatically incorrect that way, and looks awkward.
Other than that one gripe, I think you just found a fan of your writing. ^_^
Finally I get to post. - Ander - 08-14-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Bardock
5.) To encourage more member involvement with in-character development, in order to receive C&C, you will now have to give it?following all above regulations, especially #1. Quid pro quo?fair trade. Every single time you ask for C&C, you are required to give it to someone else first. If there be no current (as in, two weeks old or more) requests for you to commentate on, PM me asking for an exception. If I find a thread asking for C&C that is not first validated by this rule, I will promptly delete it. If you have given a two-sentence reply to try and qualify with minimal effort, your thread will be locked until you can give a better response.
I can't find yours.
Finally I get to post. - Kazuya - 08-14-2006
Retane's or my own?
Finally I get to post. - Ander - 08-14-2006
Retane's. He posted asking for C&C, but I can't find a recent post where he gave C&C for someone else.
Finally I get to post. - Rem-13 - 08-14-2006
Not to butt in but he didn't ask for your C&C. So he really doesn't have to follow that rule.
And if this means C&C of any kind (and it certainly reads that way) I don't think you have a right, cool dude or not, to force people to give out C&C just to recieve from someone like violet who gives it because they want to. I can't give proper critism because I would just preach my style or pick apart grammer, so I don't. Maybe, however, I want some myself? Should this exclude me?
Also, there are some people who are just not good at writing yet have no buisness giving C&C, but defidently need to recieve it.
Finally I get to post. - Chase - 08-14-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Bardock
Retane's. He posted asking for C&C, but I can't find a recent post where he gave C&C for someone else.
"*All C&C requests posted before the date of this post are exempt. Any C&C requests made afterward the date of this post are bound by it. "
The rules are from 09.08.2006
His is from 27.07.2006
@GJ, It's a good rule. Just pick apart the grammar, make him feel bad, and request your own C&C afterwards =)
Finally I get to post. - Ander - 08-14-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Garlic Jr
Not to butt in but he didn't ask for your C&C. So he really doesn't have to follow that rule.
And if this means C&C of any kind (and it certainly reads that way) I don't think you have a right, cool dude or not, to force people to give out C&C just to recieve from someone like violet who gives it because they want to. I can't give proper critism because I would just preach my style or pick apart grammer, so I don't. Maybe, however, I want some myself? Should this exclude me?
Also, there are some people who are just not good at writing yet have no buisness giving C&C, but defidently need to recieve it.
You win.
Finally I get to post. - Mal Nova - 08-15-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Toma
[quote]Originally posted by Bardock
The rules are from 09.08.2006
His is from 27.07.2006
Yea. I kinda thought this thread was gonna go down in the books of forever ignored after Bardock gave a list of people who hadn't been C&C'd and I hadn't been mentioned.
Thanks Violet for the c&c. It was appreciated.
But I've heard you say that something like the last sentance long ago. =\
Quote:I think you just found a fan of your writing.