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Round 1 Results Discussion - Burter Jr - 08-09-2006
Bulma over Murasaki
Reijin over Puar
Raditzu over Tao Pie Pie
Minoshia and 16 both eliminated
Spice over Violet and Shu
Krillin over Toma
Bardock over Android 17
Garlic Jr over Kilah
Retane over King Vegeta
Tapion over Bujin
Round 1 Results Discussion - Aero - 08-09-2006
I'm disappointed in the lack of entries. Some people would have loved to be in this.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Burter Jr - 08-09-2006
I have full intentions of making more contests like this, because quite frankly, I absolutely loved reading the entries.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Mal Nova - 08-09-2006
Meh mine sucked horridly. I didnt do an outline till I got back monday and I couldnt concentrate for anything last night due to this pain in my back =\
Round 1 Results Discussion - Aero - 08-09-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Burter Jr
I have full intentions of making more contests like this, because quite frankly, I absolutely loved reading the entries.
Cool. I was really eager to seem some of the 1st person entries. Some were kind of typical, abusing "I". And a couple others were just great.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Aero - 08-09-2006
Sure...
Round 1 Results Discussion - Burter Jr - 08-09-2006
He really did have it written, he just didn't turn it in.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Aero - 08-09-2006
Quote:Do not worry. Next time I will show you guys whose boss. Once I get adjusted to this new full-time work schedule (in which the hours change everyday >>) I will show you guys who your daddy is!
I was talking about that, lol.
To be serious, Kilah's was probably pretty good. His Rps are pretty interesting.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Hellfighter 17 - 08-09-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Hellfighter 17
Woot to all of the winners.
Oh, and great ending, Rei. I hope everyone catches that.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Ashe - 08-09-2006
Hehe, thanks. I actually was hoping for some C&C on it, since it was a lot different in style than I'm used to.
I'm sure the appeal was us being attacked by Canada.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Hellfighter 17 - 08-09-2006
I have to admit, that was awesome.
You brought a great sense of realism to it--that really shone through. You made that Nations group believable, but I wasn't sure who Germany and Russia joined. I'd imagine the Nations, but you didn't exactly make it clear. The character was true until the end. Also about the character, I love what you did there. You took a person, made them nationalistic, which caused him to be disliked and it seemed as though you were mocking the type, then when he said he wanted to name the baby after himself, BAM! What a way to use the ol' switcharoo with our feelings and help give light that there is always more to a person. Also, it was a great idea using Virginia. You know it, and you showed it. The only tiff I have is the odd spelling mistake, and I don't like contractions. Like, I would have put 'District of Columbia' instead of 'D.C.,' and 'Virginia' instead of 'VA.' Still a great read, though.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Ashe - 08-09-2006
I know I probably had spelling problems. I don't have Word on this comp, so I had NO spell checker, haha.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Aero - 08-09-2006
I saw maybe one or two, but I ignored them. The story was too good to be worrying about spelling.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Hellfighter 17 - 08-09-2006
Quote:Originally posted by ReijinA couple of them were funny, like I read one word as 'bamboozled,' meaning Canada bamboozled USA. xD
I know I probably had spelling problems. I don't have Word on this comp, so I had NO spell checker, haha.
Also, http://spellchecker.net. It was my life savior for a while.
EDIT: Holy crud. They have advanced in the year or so since I've been there.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Rem-13 - 08-09-2006
Meh, my heart wasn't in this one. Good thing Kila was busy.
Round 1 Results Discussion - CoolSpice - 08-09-2006
Good job to everyone. Their all really good, although I havn't read some of them yet. Too bad Shu didn't get his done, or submited, I don't know. Good job Vi. Thanks.
Round 1 Results Discussion - The Terminator - 08-10-2006
xD
For the record, I thought it was due by the end of today.
Yes, I know I read it wrong. Don't everyone flame me at once.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Hellfighter 17 - 08-10-2006
That's so awesome. You could have said 'I' and won.
Round 1 Results Discussion - Hellfighter 17 - 08-10-2006
He's facing two people.
How hard can that be?
Round 1 Results Discussion - Aero - 08-10-2006
Also he isn't facing anyone that is way better than him either.