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Save the trees! - Chase - 10-20-2006
Seriously though, I got a project for school, I need to make a vector on the following theme: "Save the trees." Corny, yea...
This is my basic sketch + shading added (Note that this is the 1st time I ever vectored without an image to go off of...
![[Image: Sketch_raw.jpg]](http://orbitupload.com/uploads/Sketch_raw.jpg)
What do you think? C&C please.
Also, what do you think I should improve?
(It's up on my DeviantArt page btw, if anyone wants the name, tell me.)
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-20-2006
What happened to it, I cant see it.
Save the trees! - Chase - 10-20-2006
Crap, I'm editing the correct img in.
Stupid ImageShack is now down...
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-20-2006
For the fact that it's school and I hate school I'd leave it, but Mayb give the guy a mouth..umm..more detail on the tree..IDk what else I like it though not bad for your first one without an image to go off of.
Save the trees! - Chase - 10-20-2006
Yeah, I'm going to have to completely redo the tree, like I did to the paper.....thrice.. >_>
Also, how would his mouth be? Like (:- |) or (:- () ?
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-20-2006
i think a sad face would be appropriate
Save the trees! - Chase - 10-20-2006
Alright I'll add it in next morning. I'll redo the tree too.
Hell, probably redo the whole pic excepting the guy who I think looks really good (don't you?).
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-20-2006
yeah, why re-do it all, personally I dont think it's bad, but its up to you.
Save the trees! - Kazuya - 10-20-2006
I think it looks fine how it is. The expressionless face kind of leaves room for the imagination, the expression is in the eyes.
And is it me, or does those hills in the background look like asscheeks?
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-20-2006
yes it does look like asscheeks lol
Edit: which is not a bad thing.
Save the trees! - Chase - 10-20-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Violet
I think it looks fine how it is. The expressionless face kind of leaves room for the imagination, the expression is in the eyes.
And is it me, or does those hills in the background look like asscheeks?
I hoped you wouldn't notice until I got to redoing them...it! ... I'll just redo the background/tree, because I'm not pleased with how it all blends right now. I got all the paths (all 42) still saved in the .psd, and I'll simply delete everything I don't need, and redo it....
Also, DA ID -> SSJokker
That's where I'll do the minor updates and keep it posted...
Save the trees! - Chase - 10-22-2006
/dubblet
![[Image: treelb9.jpg]](http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/7857/treelb9.jpg)
Went for a less cartoonish feel.
(Inspired from ctrl-alt-del art if you can't tell...)
C&C please? (I know I messed up 2 things...the shoes and the paper, which I'll redo....but not now...)
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-23-2006
aww no buttcheeks lol, It looks good I like how there is only a branch there and the rest of the land is treeless, and whats with the random spider web?
Edit: not that its bad I was just wondering out loud.
Save the trees! - Chase - 10-23-2006
Uh, the spider web means he's been standing there for...a while...
And there will be trees just...not...yet...
Save the trees! - Shun - 10-23-2006
oh...I didnt mean it sarcastically I actually like it, because it shows the paper there and no trees, adding to the point your trying to get across. Dont you think? Eh edit it if you want to it is your work. :] Just try your best it'll turn out great.