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A poem I wrote >.> - Dr. Cringle - 10-30-2006
Dear Grandma and Grandpa,
How long has it been?
Forever and a day, it seems like to me, something forever intertwined? in my memory.
In my memory, there you were, forever incased, and always and forever, permanently embraced.
I realize now, I might forget, but though my memory might fade, my love will never quit.
You must know that in time things will change, but never will my affection ever change?
In my heart, you will always be, forever and ever, right beside me?
So what did you guys think?
A poem I wrote >.> - Banned Dana - 10-30-2006
I like it Spencer! It's touching.
A poem I wrote >.> - Dr. Cringle - 10-30-2006
Quote:Originally posted by PiccoloxD Thanks Dana, lol.
I like it Spencer! It's touching.
A poem I wrote >.> - Tamsin - 10-30-2006
It`s nice. The letter format makes it a bit difficult to read but otherwise it`s good.
A poem I wrote >.> - Ander - 10-30-2006
I envision Panbuukin reciting it and it makes me laugh. =D
But the poem itself is good. Miss your grandparents?
A poem I wrote >.> - Lucifer - 10-30-2006
You'd be hard pushed to get away with labelling that a poem.
A poem I wrote >.> - Dr. Cringle - 10-30-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Bardock
I envision Panbuukin reciting it and it makes me laugh. =D
But the poem itself is good. Miss your grandparents?
Heh, who knows, I may do it someday.
And yeah, I do. My grandparents left America today, and are going back to Sweden. This was their last trip to America.