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Yamcha vs Paragus - Shun - 11-17-2006
I was wondering if I could get some C&C on my posts on the spar. I didn't like how mine were at all but I figured it wouldn't hurt to get other peoples opinions. My last post was...idk I just wanted to get it over with, it took longer than expected. Anyway I know you guys don't wanna know how I felt before/ after and about my own posts lol so here is the spar
Yamcha vs Paragus - Dehan - 11-18-2006
8/10. Pretty good wolf dude.
Yamcha vs Paragus - Tempo - 11-18-2006
i dont want to make a seperate thread but would any one mind giving my part some C&C as well.
Yamcha let me just add that it was great sparring you and i would be happy to do it again sometime.
Yamcha vs Paragus - Shun - 12-01-2006
This was a while ago..but I am still wondering what people thought. So.....
*BUMP*
@Turles: thanks man
Yamcha vs Paragus - OldNoriAccount - 12-01-2006
6/10
I know you can do better Yamcha. You did better when you fought me.
Or at least, thats my opinion.
Yamcha vs Paragus - Shun - 12-01-2006
I don't know what it was, but I think my spar with you was my best writing lol IDK
(sigh)
thanks Akane
I will try to do better.
Yamcha vs Paragus - Shun - 12-01-2006
Just because it was mentioned I was wondering if anyone would like to give C-N-C on my 2 posts on this as well.
Yamcha Vs. Akane
I figured put int in here to not waste another thread.