04-19-2011, 08:59 PM
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post556723
I guess I want some feed back from the last two posts....
I think im looking for flow wise type stuff and whatever you might think I need to touch up on...
I got the storyline parts nearly covered...
I guess I want some feed back from the last two posts....
I think im looking for flow wise type stuff and whatever you might think I need to touch up on...
I got the storyline parts nearly covered...
![[Image: ChubbsMal.png]](http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s174/havik_album/ChubbsMal.png)
Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've become a really great writer