09-14-2006, 10:43 AM
Yamcha is already is use by someone and you forgot your three best moves.
Also, while your roleplay is long enough, there are too many gramatical mistakes and spelling errors to make you a member of Chubbs.
I am going to recommend you to the Roleplaying School so you can become a better roleplayer and you can join this site later.
Also, while your roleplay is long enough, there are too many gramatical mistakes and spelling errors to make you a member of Chubbs.
I am going to recommend you to the Roleplaying School so you can become a better roleplayer and you can join this site later.


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