02-16-2007, 01:23 PM
Someone's already trying to join as Goku Jr.
Also, you need to pick different starting moves. Everyone knows how to use an energy blast, and none of your abilities alter your stats or have a set percentage of damage.
Your roleplay is not the style we use. That's a wierd mix of script and paragraph format, and we only use paragraph. Look at some other people's writing to get an idea of how we roleplay and make a new sample.
Also, you need to pick different starting moves. Everyone knows how to use an energy blast, and none of your abilities alter your stats or have a set percentage of damage.
Your roleplay is not the style we use. That's a wierd mix of script and paragraph format, and we only use paragraph. Look at some other people's writing to get an idea of how we roleplay and make a new sample.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=Pass you by, it's all in this life you have
Pass you by, good-bye to you=_
Pass you by, good-bye to you=_