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Joining as Daizu
#1
Character Name: Daizu

Personality (Fighting Style): Ruthless, Fearless, Loves to Fight, Thinks Fighting is like a game and is fun.

Starting Planet: Vegeta

Email: InuyashaEX4@yahoo.com
AIM: InuyashaEx4

3 Starting Moves:
Galick-Gun

White Lightning:
A beam that is charged from the finger tips of the middle, and index finger, its from the users own ki, combined with particles of actual lightning. There are some stages to it depending on how long charged.

Stage 1 (1 turn charge): Red
Stage 2 (2 turns charge): Pitch Black
Stage 3 (3 turns charge): Pure White

Demon Slicing Fangs:
A curved beam that is using launched in threes, it is bloody red. Combined with the users own blood and ki. It has alot of destructive force, it is also very accurate, and fast.

Role-Play sample:

The wind pushed the dead leaves that fell towards the ground around in circles. The wind blew hard on the trees as they slanted sideways, and more dead leaves came off of it. The leaves blew past the motionless Daizu, sticking onto his face and then blowing off again. He stood there with his eyes closed, focusing on something; sweat was dripping down slowly from his head and sticking on his chin for one last moment before dropping towards the ground.

As the last leaf dropped from the near-by trees and landed on the ground, Daizu?s eyes flickered open, sending an enormous surge of power though the air, making a invisible bubble of air around him, as the bubble of air got further away from Daizu it disappeared. Daizu?s hand soon shifted behind his waist, striking the bottom of his palms together, Daizu charged up a purple energy ball. The purple energy ball grew larger and larger until the energy was bursting out from the gaps in his fingers.

?Galick-Gun!? shouted Daizu as he thrust both of his hands forwards and released the purple energy ball towards a huge rock, about the size of a house.

The purple energy wave crashed into the huge rock, as the rocks crumbled towards the ground, making ash and all sorts of debris rose into the air. Without looking at the crumbling rocks, Daizu turned around and began walking back though the trail he had came from.

?Hey you there!?

Daizu?s closed eyes suddenly opened, his scouter on his left eye flickered alive as numbers began excavating, higher and higher. Finally the number on his scouter began coming to a halt. The powerlevel of this saiyan was far greater then his own, just staying there in the presence of him, took everything out of Daizu. A grin appeared from Daizu as he turned around.

?What do you want,? said Daizu.

The saiyan slowly began to drift towards the ground. He had the same clothing on as Daizu, except that his scouter was on his right eye, he had spiky hair, and his tail wrapped around his waist.

?I?m recruiting men,? said the saiyan ?I saw what you did to that rock over there, that was pretty impressive.?

?So you want me to go along with you?? asked Daizu ?Why do you think I would join you??

A smirk appeared on the side of the saiyan?s face, ?I think you?ll be interested in the proposal,? said the saiyan ?See I plan on going to this planet Earth, I heard stories about it and how weak the people are there, I plan on planting a tree there? But not just any old tree it called, The Tree Of Might, only could be plant there, and it will give us power beyond your imaginations, so what do you say??

Daizu repeated everything the saiyan had told him in his head again, a grin appeared on his face, ?Power beyond my imagination uh, sounds interesting I?m in,? said Daizu ?By the way my name is Daizu.?

?Mine is Turles??
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#2
Ok I'm bumping my join form up, plz get to it ASAP.

Thxs you
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#3
Remove the lightening bit from the first move, it can't be lighteing enless you have the ability to use lightening.

Don't god mode the third move.

In the future try to use variations instead of "Daizu" all the time. Like "the warrior" or "the fighter" stuff like that.

Just so you know, Daizu isn't Saiya-Jin.

I'll have you up soon, your pass will be PMed to you, feel free to RP and post your character vault.
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