joining as omaga shinron shenron for short

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ied like to join as omaga shenron shenron for short
planet earth

email animeninja85@hotmail.com
moves kahmehameha dragons fist dark bomb ice dragon kamehameha *note its a kamehameha that can frezz the place my own way of useing a kamehameha in my own way i might need help on the moves
let me know if this rp sampel is good ied work on the move list latter here gos nothing

* after a wish made on the dark star dragon balls there were 7 shadow dragons omaga shinron was one of the strongest after a long fight from the z fighters shin ron begains to want to take over earth * shenron; those piskey z fighters all most got the best of me i need a rest * shinron flys to a near by tree and falls a sleep * a few hours latter hes awaken by a big power up to his saprize it was goku * shenron haha i see one monkey is alive any one fell like monkey hunting mhaha goku: haha thats a good one * goku gets in fighting stants and power ups to ssj4 * shenron not bad monkey man
* powers up the earth shakes Shenron; try one of my favrits * both goku and shenron get ready to do a kamehameha at full power * they both fire it at each other haveing a power strugel shenron not bad monkey man * both there kamehamehas are evely mach goku: were did you learn the kamehameha henron you were going to try it it looked cool so i wanted to try hahaha goku: not bad for a first timer shonron mine if i try someyhing out i just thoght of *goku grins shure im up fore new ones haha * shinron ok try to counter this * shinron powers up the air gets cold ice dragon ka me ha me ha!! * goku trys to block with his own but he gets frozzen in ice the feld becoms ice * shenron hehe behold my ice dragon kamehameha not bad * goku thinks to him self not bad why dident i think of that hes not bad i wounder what other tricks hes got this fight is fun henron and now for a brake * the ice brakes and gokus free * goku: good idea * they rest under a tree*

ok guys was that ok?
its ben a bit since i last role play

[Android-18]

I'm sorry but we don't allow the dragons, so no Shenron.

I've seen your join posts, and I think that this may not be the place for you. Your RPing isn't quite up to the standard we accept. You may want to try looking for another site, and one that may have characters open that you'd like to be.

You're welcome to read over the site, look at the RPs here, and improve on your writing before trying again. Right now you need a bit more practice.

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i thoght so hmmm so i need more work ok thanks at less im trying weres there is one ied like to try to play as nappa umm but may i go to the rp school form and look it over not ready to give up yet

[Android-18]

Well, you can go ahead and post there and practice. Just make sure you also read everything and understand it all.

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thank you