Back To My Roots

[Android-18]

Don't censor.

[Android-18]

Because then it's hard to read, and pretty pointless when like...all this forum knows how to swear.

[Android-18]

True, but i's just stupid to censor lol.

[Abel]

Sorry, I will be honest.

Flow sucked, rhymes were weak, you need a larger vocabulary. I really hope you are black by saying well, the "n" word. I don't ever use it, I'm white. It barely flows unless you go with slow metronomes (I think that's what it's called) and your rhythm is off.

You just got critiqued by Wildfire Productions =D

Wildfire Productions

That's me with mostly beats from Shadowville. Those are my crappy songs though. Meh, don't make fun of me people =(

[Kaden]

Originally posted by Tapion
I really hope you are black by saying well, the "n" word. I don't ever use it, I'm white.

I hate it when people perpetuate that double-standard.

[Hellfighter 17]

Any words that ended in "er" disrupted the flow (e.g: embroider) with how you set it up. I thought it was a'ight.

Originally posted by Raditzu

Originally posted by Tapion
I really hope you are black by saying well, the "n" word. I don't ever use it, I'm white.

I hate it when people perpetuate that double-standard.

Concurred.

[Burter Jr]

If anyone gets mad at me for saying nigger in a completely unoffensive way, I'll lose all respect for them.

In my opinion, that's even more racist then people seem to think the actual word is.

EDIT:

Since this is the second time you've said it, Tap, I'll say this now. Stop it. You don't have to be black to say nigger.

[Abel]

Technically, this was the first. And I just see it as offensive because that's what they were called in the past as slaves.

And I can rap as fast as Twista when it comes down to it, but I still don't like the flow to it.

Edit: And Burter, just because I think it's offensive and it's not to you doesn't mean it doesn't bother me. You saying it like so even bothers me, that's me, sorry. I have my personal preference towards it and you have yours. I would just like it if you didn't say it just because it's brought up and I don't like it.

[Burter Jr]

You just said it. You have your preference, I have mine. You're going to have show some tolerence.

[Abel]

And I am trying. And could you please show some respect by not doing it, though?

[Sammah]

The "N" word...quite controversial.

Personally, I never say/use it even if all my friends are black, It's just something I don't say. And I really don't care if other people say it, white or black, as long as it's not implying the harsh version, then that's just fucked up.