What on Earth?

[Celena]

Can I get my Spiritken training graded plz?

[Celena]

I know I'm bumping it early, but I figured nobody noticed my thread coz of the irrelivent title I a gave it.

[Hellfighter 17]

We, or at least I, read threads in here regardless of title. It'll take a little while to read, but I'll give it a look over later.

[Celena]

Thanks HF, I can always count on you. <3

[Celena]

BUMP.

Since HF has told me that he is busy sorting out PC3, could another mod handle my Spiritken training plz?

[Android-18]

I'm going to have to decline your training.

As I read through it, I noticed that some of your posts were horribly small. Some were full of nothing but dialogue. One post was more images than writing. You improved near the end, but overall you just didn't write as much as you could have.

At first glance, seeing how long you've been working on it, and that it was two pages, it looked sound. However, the writing itself was lacking.

I can't say how many posts, or how long, or how detailed. You just need more, that's all I can really say.

You can get another staff members opinion, but that's where I stand. Feel free to try again, though.

[Celena]

Yeah, when I started off the training, my RP's were not all that great, but then they improved as I went along. I was afraid someone would say that, but oh well. I don't even know how my story line is going to work if I have to continue it off. =(

[Android-18]

Do a part two, try again, put more into it this time.

[Celena]

I'm just drained out of ideas. I just don't know what to do anymore. I think I'm going to forget about Spiritken. I really struggled to pull through at times, and felt like I was forcing my self to carry on, for the sake of a power up.

[Android-18]

Never do it just for power. You should have done the RPs for fun, and experience.