Move changes

[John Doe]

I was wondering if I could change my moves alittle. I was thinking about renaming my moves, but I would need to change minor details before that happens. Here's where I'm going with this.



Mirror Move: Creates a blue barrier of energy around him that can be used to deflect a powerful attack from his opponent back towards them. This attack can fail only if his opponent?s attack is too powerful for the mirror to deflect. If it fails, he will receive up to half of the damage made by his opponent. However this attack may use up allot of ki.

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Death Mirror: Koola creates a red barrier of energy around him that can be used to deflect a powerful attack from his opponent back towards them. This attack can fail only if his opponent?s attack is too powerful for the mirror to deflect. If it fails, he will receive up to half of the damage made by his opponent. However this attack may use up allot of ki.

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Tiger Fist: Charges up a blue ki of energy in his fist. He then releases the energy as he throws his fist into his opponent. He can also attack from both of his fists at a great speed. The attack power varies on the amount of ki he stores in his fists. Just before he strikes his opponent, the head of a large barely visible White Tiger will appear. As he strikes his opponent the White Tiger will roar out loud.

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Death Fist: Koola charges up a red ki of energy in his fist. He then releases the energy as he throws his fist into his opponent. He can also attack from both of his fists at a great speed. The attack power varies on the amount of ki he stores in his fists.

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Grand Finale: Raises both hands up and charges up a large ball of blue ki above him. He then brings the ball of energy in front of him and fires the ball attached to a beam of ki, towards his opponent.

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Supernova: Koola raises his finger up and charges up a large ball of yellow ki above him. He then brings the ball of energy in front of him and fires the ball towards his opponent.

[Sullivan]

So you just changed the names and ki color? If they're already approved with the ki color and names they had, I'll go ahead and add 'em to your vault, in place of what was there. I can't add them to your roster though, another staff'll have to do that.

I assume they were approved the way they were, then? If so, yeah, those changes are fine.

[John Doe]

Originally posted by Celipa
So you just changed the names and ki color? If they're already approved with the ki color and names they had, I'll go ahead and add 'em to your vault, in place of what was there. I can't add them to your roster though, another staff'll have to do that.

I assume they were approved the way they were, then? If so, yeah, those changes are fine.

thx

[Sullivan]

Welcome. ^_^

Higher up, can we have these changes added to his roster as well?

[John Doe]

Bump?

[John Doe]

Bump? x2

[John Doe]

Tripple post ftw!!!

I figured it'd be better if I just put my new Character Vault here as well.

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Name: Koola
Age: Unknown
Sex: Male
Race: Changeling
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 265lbs
Standing: Neutral
Alliance: Frozen Darkness

Appearance



Koola is a purple & white changeling with a small amount of red on the sides of his face. He looks to be in his 4th form, but it is actually his preform of stage 1. He?s about 6'2" and his tail reaches up to 7 feet. His eyes are blood red, and almost always has a cold stare. Sometimes, he can have pure black eyes, and a weird tattoo on his chest whenever Koorsala(see relations) possesses him.

Personality

Koola tends to be calm and collected most of the time. He never likes to do much of anything unless he has gotten time to plan ahead. His face is emotionless, and doesn?t show his feelings to anyone but his closest companions. His favorite pastime is sleeping. He always sleeps before an oncoming battle, to rest his mind and body, and to plan strategies. He normally doesn?t do anything unless it?s in for his benefit, but has be known to save random civilians from time to time. He used to be evil, but has now begun to sway to the good side, but he still has a lot to go.

Fighting Style

Koola is calculated and cunning when he fights. He doesn?t have much power, so he has to outsmart his opponent to win. He can lead his foe into another area and into a trap, or taunt them into using all their energy and delivering the final blow. He takes pride in hiding his ideas behind his stone cold face of his, so his foes have no idea what?s coming.

Moves:

Supernova: Koola raises his finger up and charges up a large ball of yellow ki above him. He then brings the ball of energy in front of him and fires the ball towards his opponent.

Death Mirror: Koola creates a red barrier of energy around him that can be used to deflect a powerful attack from his opponent back towards them. This attack can fail only if his opponent?s attack is too powerful for the mirror to deflect. If it fails, he will receive up to half of the damage made by his opponent. However this attack may use up allot of ki.

Death Fist: Koola charges up a red ki of energy in his fist. He then releases the energy as he throws his fist into his opponent. He can also attack from both of his fists at a great speed. The attack power varies on the amount of ki he stores in his fists.

Death Beam: Koola can fire a small red beam from his two index fingers, his eyes, and the tip of his tail. The beam is not very powerful and is easily deflected, but does not require much ki and is used mainly as a piercing attack to other energy attacks and shields. Otherwise, it's slightly stronger than a regular ki blast.

Tech:

Ki Sense 1 - Koola can detect where great powers are somewhere nearby. His range is a few miles or so.

Relationships

PC

Captain Silver- He met this man during Dante's Abyss as well as many others. This human was the leader of the group at the time, but betrayed them all for unknown reasons (at least to him) and was killed by the rest of them. He later met the human back at the Frozen Garden, where the two fought one another. Koola lost and was sent to hell.

Android 17: This humanoid-like being was the Commander of the Outcasts during a tournament called Dante?s Abyss: Conquest. Koola was a General under his command and lead a squad of men. Koola ?betrayed? the Outcast?s loyalty by disobeying orders, and was dismissed by another General, Super Buu.

Super Buu: This pink living gum wad nearly killed Koola in the Dante?s Abyss: Conquest tournament. After not following an order, Buu and his men found Koola and forced him to leave. The changeling barley survived the attack, and escaped with his life.

Cargo: On their mission with Craetor, Koola met this small namek on Vegeta. He learned from him that he used to be a pupil under Silver and Koola told Cargo that he met and fought him. They parted ways after grounding the Lord?s ship, saying that he had to continue to train elsewhere.

Jeice, Turles, & Goten: These three were teammates with during the Saiyan/Changeling war. At first, he was treated like an outcast and shunned by the rest of the team. But later, he gained their trust and respect, and they did too.

NPC

Koorsala: She is the sprit of the scythe that Silver gave to him. Koorsala can command water in all shapes and forms, and can sometimes possess Koola when he?s in trouble, giving him black eyes and cause his tattoo on his chest to glow. She is used to having her own way, and argues with her host, Koola, almost every time she decides to speak. As far as Koola is concerned, she is a useless whiny bitch that doesn?t know her place, but he hasn?t realized her true powers yet.

Flemings: Koola met this changeling soldier on Vegeta when it was under siege by the Changeling armada. This changeling is very weak compared to Koola, but still remains highly useful. He can fly ships and can handle many strange technological gizmos. He is the only one of few who called him Prince Koola.

[John Doe]

bump? x3

[Ruhiel]

Kerpow.

I don't know about the roster though. I can't do anything for ya there.

[John Doe]

kthanks A-20!

But really, could a staffer update my roster?

[Alura]

No one ever looks on the roster for moves anyway. Is it that huge of a deal?

I'm serious. If it's THAT huge of a deal, I'll do it. But typically, no one looks on the roster to find out the moves; they go to the vault

[John Doe]

No, it isn't very serious. However, I feel a little empty inside if I know something wasn't finnished.

You don't have to if you don't want to.