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Broken
#1
I gave you
Body, soul
Ripped like a butterfly
You hurt me
I gave it all
You took it
Killing me slowly
You shattered what I had
You tore me inside out

Excuses you gave
Truth or lie?
I can’t understand
I lost some soul
Bundled up
I lost some of my heart
you put me in the middle
I lost it all

I’m sorry I tried
I’ll never be the same
Every time, each one
Ripped apart like a butterfly
Falling, drifting, leaving
I never thought
You would break me
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#2
Beautifully written. =( Sorry for whatever is making you write that.
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#3
I'm sorry he wasn't the right one.
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#4
We got through it. It helped to write that out, and we've talked.
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#5
I've recently experienced something, something I wish not to disclose. However, theres something I just had to get off my chest. No matter what they did to you, you will show them. Your heart, your soul.... Its yours, don't let this shitty stupid illusion get you down. You're a beautiful soul, and I mean that, it just takes some deep to recognize who we all are. I wish I could take all of your pain and place it somewhere, somewhere where it couldn't escape. Somewhere where it's powerless to cause you tears. Keep being a good and wholsom soul and life will get better. Just do. And no matter what you do, don't ever stop doing.

To stop doing is to stop living. Just know it wont always be like this, one day you'll wake up and a smile will be all that your face will care to muster. And on that day you will realize it was all worth it.

Made respects for your poetry, very beautiful montage of words, keep up the creative juices. =D

I hope that put things into perspective for you, or at very least brings a smile to your face. Know nothing can keep you from attaining your dreams, wishes and desires and that its only the way we treat, act, and respond to others that give us peace. Anyone willing to cause you this sort of pain isn't worth it. And like a slap in their face, in the rebirth beauty is all that is left. Because I know, you know, shit even he knows that it's going to take a bit more than that to break you down.

You are special and worthy, don't let some punk ass fake man tell you otherwise. It takes a real man to appreciate a real woman. Stop messing with boys, they just simply aren't at your level.

I hope this helps and bless you.
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#6
Thank you for that. I appreciate it. Smile
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