11-24-2005, 10:23 PM
You can not start on Arlia, only Earth, Vegeta, or Namek.
We currently have a fat/majin buu.
That RP was...well, it needs work. Instead of repeating names, say things like "the pink warrior" or "the fat fighter" to make it more interesting. Also, make paragraphs, don't just write everything in one big blob of text, when a new person speaks it sgould be a new paragraph.
You also start with 3 moves, not 2.
We currently have a fat/majin buu.
That RP was...well, it needs work. Instead of repeating names, say things like "the pink warrior" or "the fat fighter" to make it more interesting. Also, make paragraphs, don't just write everything in one big blob of text, when a new person speaks it sgould be a new paragraph.
You also start with 3 moves, not 2.
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