05-07-2006, 01:41 AM
Inthe last paragraph of the roleplay it looks as though someone is either thinking or talking, but there's no way of differentiating it. If it was just speech and your forgot quotation marks, okay. If it was thought, maybe try something to have it stand out. I, personally, italicize thought, as do some others here.
Yes, you do pick bets moves; it tells you to choose three on the joining page. Cooler equals Koola, who is taken. Your roleplay suffices, so pick a different character.
Yes, you do pick bets moves; it tells you to choose three on the joining page. Cooler equals Koola, who is taken. Your roleplay suffices, so pick a different character.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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