11-22-2006, 02:07 AM
Your basic writing is pretty good, but there are a few things I'd like to work on with you first. Make a post in Roleplaying School titled "Captain Ginyu" and we'll go from there.
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_=Pass you by, it's all in this life you have
Pass you by, good-bye to you=_
Pass you by, good-bye to you=_