Come on, you know you want to.

[Vejita I]

For me, please.

Yeah okay, so for some odd reason I managed to put up a decent RP even after going through PC3 AND DA:C. So, C&C, please? Yeah, I'm not too keen on listening to english errors so save me on that. But if you have anything else you can enlighten me on, be my guest.

Here: Lost.

[Vejita I]

You guys suck at this.

[OldNoriAccount]

I read it awhile back, and I really liked it.

Although it was very dark. One of my favorite that you have made actually. >_>

[Jewtastic]

Continue it. Please do. I want to see where it goes. His pain, his anger, you made it all clear as fucking day. Sorry I didn't get to this sooner, I read it a while back when you posted this thread but didn't actually remember to post here. He's hurting, broken, I want to see how it turns out yo. Finish this you bastard.

[Vejita I]

I was actually planning on doing something with Broli, but since he wants to go ruin my plans by having a life, pfftt, I'll do it on my own. Probably won't be too swift with the RPs, though. I'll attempt it. Anyone else have anything to spot out that I'm doing wrong?