Joining (hopefully)

[Yamu]

Your starting planet has to be Earth, Namek, or Vegita.

You start with only three best moves, but everyone can form basic ki balls, beams, and waves. AS well as fly and do the cool dispear/reapear from the beggining.

Chubb's DBZ RPG is like an alternate timeline of DB, so while you may pick Zangya she may not neccesarily be Bojack's henchman. We have a Bojack, and in his RPs he may have never met your charachter.

You need to redo your RP example. We write in past tense here. Just take a look at some of the other threads here, I would advise Dante's Abysss to make sure you get a good one, and please try again.

[Yamu]

It would be fine but we require a 300 word minimum. You are on the right track with the past tense, I would sggest you just start from scratch just to show us you get the drift.

Those three moves are fine, but just as a player, not Staff, I would suggest picking something that will help you RP wise like Solar Flare or Ki Sword instead of two Super Attacks, since you really only need one.

You planet is fine now.

[Yamu]

You're getting there. You need to go over your grammer though. Your sentence structure is a little off, such as:


It was inevitable upon look on both fighters. That neither would stand down,

Should just be:

It was unmistakeable by the look on both fighters, that neither would stand down.

See how the second just flows alot better?

Try and revise that last post and see if you can get it into shape.

[Android-18]

You're doing good, but I'll let Yamu handle it. Give him 72 hours before getting impatient. We usually get busy and we tell everyone to wait that long.

[Burter Jr]

I think you're fine. Since 18 wants Yamu to handle it, we'll leave it for him. Regardless, you seem coherent and even if he wants you to do another, you'll be fine when you get in.

[Burter Jr]

Activated. A roster sheet will be made later, by a mod

[Yamu]

Register now.

[Yamu]

You should be all set up. Your password is 'qwerty' change it ASAP.

Welcome to Chubbs.