05-16-2010, 10:34 PM
My account hasn't been approved yet, but I thought maybe my character application had to be accepted first. I'm not sure :/
I read through the rules and couldn't find anything to say about needing to wait to be approved before posting my character app. so I hope I'm not doing anything wrong...
Name: Kokeiru
Age: 18
Race: Generic (Konatsa-Jin)
Sex: Male
Starting Planet: Namek
Profession: Unemployed
Fighting style: Kokeiru’s fighting style is nimble, yet; fierce hand-to-hand combat.
Short Bio:
Kokeiru's hometown on Planet Konats was felled by a freak asteroid shower. With little option to escape, Kokeiru had to launch himself into space using the only functional emergency escape pod left. With the coordinate controls damaged, back on Konats; the pod crash landed on Planet Namek.
General Description:
Like most Konatsa-Jin's, Kokeiru has a pale complexion, pointy ears and typical red hair. His hair is styled into a Mohawk which tappers into a ponytail at the back. Kokeiru usually wears a serious and stern, almost scowl like expression on his face, with piercing blue eyes, which makes him seem unapproachable to some. Kokeiru's outfit consists of a black vest behind a tan brown jacket, blue jeans and steel-capped boots.
Starting Abilities:
1) Inner strength
2) Ki Sense
Trait: Compassionate
Stats: (115%)
Strength - 32%
Focus - 20%
Endurance - 30%
Agility - 33%
Role-play Sample: (396/300)
That day started off like any other. With the same typical daily routines I was used to, and found so dull and uneventful. I now regret all those days wasted on wishing for something more, something more exciting, and spending nights dreaming that I was destined for better things. Because, If my hopes and dreams HAD been answered it was at the cost of everybody else’s in my fair home town of Fenix.
It was a warm autumn evening. I lay on my bed, hands behind my head, gazing up at my apartment ceiling, occasionally flicking my eyes out of the window to stare lazily at the purple clouds drift softly across the vermilion sky. The sounds of the town’s people’s hustle and communion, that had irritated me at the time, now seems relaxing to me in comparison to the terror and destruction that were soon to follow later that day.
A few short moments past, then suddenly; a shift in the city’s usual mumbles caused my attention to fully fix on the window. The sounds of the city had morphed into a sea of gasps and exclamations of horror. I leapt up from the bed and made my way cautiously to the window. There were several black streaks darting down from the sky in the distance and then, without any warning; the ground shook violently, causing me to lose my balance and hit the floor behind me.
I was slightly winded, but I didn’t take my time getting up again. I pounced upon the window, latching onto the windowsill in terror and disbelief that this gruesome situation was actually taking place! Fenix was screaming now, several more of the black rockets descended upon Konats with a vicious and violent velocity.
I knew I had to escape from Fenix or I’d be crushed under the merciless black barrage from beyond the stars. I hoped that the train line would still be in use, but I scanned outside my window quickly; in fear of a wasted journey. I soon noticed that the train station had been bombed by a meteorite. Suddenly, a harsh whistling sound swung through my ears and then seemed to hang in place, almost drowning out the screams of the disoriented town’s people; it then began to crackle and gnaw at my ear drums. A black comet had plotted its deadly course this way!
I hope this is acceptable. I know my RP sample isn't complete in the way of a plotline but it's over 300 words. If you need me to finish then that's no problem just let me know.
I read through the rules and couldn't find anything to say about needing to wait to be approved before posting my character app. so I hope I'm not doing anything wrong...
Name: Kokeiru
Age: 18
Race: Generic (Konatsa-Jin)
Sex: Male
Starting Planet: Namek
Profession: Unemployed
Fighting style: Kokeiru’s fighting style is nimble, yet; fierce hand-to-hand combat.
Short Bio:
Kokeiru's hometown on Planet Konats was felled by a freak asteroid shower. With little option to escape, Kokeiru had to launch himself into space using the only functional emergency escape pod left. With the coordinate controls damaged, back on Konats; the pod crash landed on Planet Namek.
General Description:
Like most Konatsa-Jin's, Kokeiru has a pale complexion, pointy ears and typical red hair. His hair is styled into a Mohawk which tappers into a ponytail at the back. Kokeiru usually wears a serious and stern, almost scowl like expression on his face, with piercing blue eyes, which makes him seem unapproachable to some. Kokeiru's outfit consists of a black vest behind a tan brown jacket, blue jeans and steel-capped boots.
Starting Abilities:
1) Inner strength
2) Ki Sense
Trait: Compassionate
Stats: (115%)
Strength - 32%
Focus - 20%
Endurance - 30%
Agility - 33%
Role-play Sample: (396/300)
That day started off like any other. With the same typical daily routines I was used to, and found so dull and uneventful. I now regret all those days wasted on wishing for something more, something more exciting, and spending nights dreaming that I was destined for better things. Because, If my hopes and dreams HAD been answered it was at the cost of everybody else’s in my fair home town of Fenix.
It was a warm autumn evening. I lay on my bed, hands behind my head, gazing up at my apartment ceiling, occasionally flicking my eyes out of the window to stare lazily at the purple clouds drift softly across the vermilion sky. The sounds of the town’s people’s hustle and communion, that had irritated me at the time, now seems relaxing to me in comparison to the terror and destruction that were soon to follow later that day.
A few short moments past, then suddenly; a shift in the city’s usual mumbles caused my attention to fully fix on the window. The sounds of the city had morphed into a sea of gasps and exclamations of horror. I leapt up from the bed and made my way cautiously to the window. There were several black streaks darting down from the sky in the distance and then, without any warning; the ground shook violently, causing me to lose my balance and hit the floor behind me.
I was slightly winded, but I didn’t take my time getting up again. I pounced upon the window, latching onto the windowsill in terror and disbelief that this gruesome situation was actually taking place! Fenix was screaming now, several more of the black rockets descended upon Konats with a vicious and violent velocity.
I knew I had to escape from Fenix or I’d be crushed under the merciless black barrage from beyond the stars. I hoped that the train line would still be in use, but I scanned outside my window quickly; in fear of a wasted journey. I soon noticed that the train station had been bombed by a meteorite. Suddenly, a harsh whistling sound swung through my ears and then seemed to hang in place, almost drowning out the screams of the disoriented town’s people; it then began to crackle and gnaw at my ear drums. A black comet had plotted its deadly course this way!
I hope this is acceptable. I know my RP sample isn't complete in the way of a plotline but it's over 300 words. If you need me to finish then that's no problem just let me know.
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