Karachi(updated)

[Karachi]

Name:Karachi

Race: Saiyan

Sex: Male

Starting Planet: Vegeta

Profession: Martial Arts Instructor

Fighting Style: Overly aggressvive but still takes time to stratigize

Short Bio: Some say he is a descentent from the lineage of Vegeta but this is yet to be proven.

General Description: About 6'0 tall. Karachi has a smybol on his left cheek that represents a lighting bolt. Hes not bulked up but you can tell he has done some training. Hair is like Trunks but his face is more like a mix between Vegeta and Yamacha.

Starting Abilitiesossesion and Invulerability

Role-play Sample: Karachi glanced around on his this new strange world. Blue grass and tall skinny trees...what word is this, he thinks to himself. "Hello?" Karachi calls out in a cry. Almost out of thin air a green Namekian appeared,"Agghhhh," Karachi screams, as he suddenly wakes up in his bed. It has been 10 years since he arrived on this strange planet. He had arrived here as a mere child abandoned by his family and his race. He must now make a name for himself in this strange world doing whatever he can to prove them wrong. " I will relinquish all who betray me and whoever gets in my way shall be forever tomented," Karachi smiles. He simply dashs up into the sky and starts to fly into the morning horizon.

Stats:
Strength-75%
Focus-5%
Endurance-10%
Agility-10%

Trait: Bully

[Orion]

Looks good, but again your roleplay isn't the minimum 300 words. Also, while it's fine for joining purposes, once you start writing on the site you'll need to adhere to past tense.

EDIT: You can reply to this thread for the roleplay sample.

[Karachi]

“Power level 200 you are weak Karachi” this Nartack said to me as he checked my battle power with a scouter. The machine that covered his left eye finished blinking and beeping as it died down he looked at me with mocking eyes. “You expect to be a Sayian warrior with that pitiful power? You disgust me get out of my sight you can clean the hanger."
"My aragant father Nartack. Who cares that his power lvl might exceed mine for now. I'll be stronger than him just wait,"Karachi thought to himself.

That was 10 years ago.
Now I am in a martial arts instructor. I have left Vegeta until I get stronger and I will show them all esp. my father.
The fire is burning red hot as the smell of the local wildlife is burning on the fire and invading my nostrils.
“Thinkin about the past Karachi?” Regius asked me.
Karachi looked up at Regius, he was also a Saiyan, one who was killed in a battle long ago. He often comes to me in my dreams.
“Yeah Regius I am.” Karachi replied.
Regius picks up two sticks with the wildlife on and throws one to me.
“It should be cooked about now, “ he said
"I'm not hungry for dream food," Karachi siad looking at the ground rembering the hard troubles of his past.
“It doesn’t pay to fight on a empty stomach” Regius said to me, Karachi just smiled back.
“Karachi you need to put your past behind you and move on revenge will destroy you in the end” Regius said.
"I wish you had told me that long ago...." Karachi replied softly.

[Karachi]

“Power level 3 you are weak Karachi” this Nartack said to me as he checked my battle power with a scouter. The machine that covered his left eye finished blinking and beeping as it died down he looked at me with mocking eyes. “You expect to be a Sayian warrior with that pitiful power? You disgust me get out of my sight you can clean the hanger."
"My aragant father Nartack. Who cares that his power lvl might exceed mine for now. I'll be stronger than him just wait,"Karachi thought to himself.

That was 10 years ago.
Now I am in a martial arts instructor. I have left Vegeta until I get stronger and I will show them all esp. my father.
The fire is burning red hot as the smell of the local wildlife is burning on the fire and invading my nostrils.
“Thinkin about the past Karachi?” Regius asked me.
Karachi looked up at Regius, he was also a Saiyan, one who was killed in a battle long ago. He often comes to me in my dreams.
“Yeah Regius I am.” Karachi replied.
Regius picks up two sticks with the wildlife on and throws one to me.
“It should be cooked about now, “ he said
"I'm not hungry for dream food," Karachi siad looking at the ground rembering the hard troubles of his past.
“It doesn’t pay to fight on a empty stomach” Regius said to me, Karachi just smiled back.
“Karachi you need to put your past behind you and move on revenge will destroy you in the end” Regius said.
"I wish you had told me that long ago...." Karachi replied softly, quietly laughing to himself.