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[C&C] Sigfried
#1
Hm. I don't have one of these up I guess.

Well, here it is.
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#2
For the record, Sig, I'm posting your's after the saga.
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#3
Yooo, anybody that's got some pro/cons for me, it would be appreciated. Also bout to do some stuff w/ Orsalis in the tourney.
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#4
Spellcheck, bitches.

I also think your posts can get a bit unnecessarily lengthy (perish the thought!). Sometimes I wish you'd just hack 'em in half. It's not a problem when it's all one scene, but if it necessitates you using your fancy post splitter, consider just ending it there and picking up with a new one.

On a p-p-positive note, you know I like your writing. You're good at bringing in a bit of a psychological and philosophical edge to your stories. You also usually have a good sense of pacing.
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If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.

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