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By virtue of Orion's default on both of his posts, Alex T automatically wins. Nevertheless, this topic will remain open for C&C on Alex's posts.
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Mal Nova Wrote:I do apologize for using the word rape. There are four separate definitions for the word rape, two of which describe vegetation...
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I know I talked to you in the IM, but here we go.
I know that Alex is strait forward, to the point. I like that, but I also sense a tinge of derangement, of crazy lurking in there somehow. I'd like to see it come out, remembering drugs and all the rest. Not even like, direct exposition, but just little quips, little asides, little bubbling thoughts that go back to his more maniacal side. Just a little infusion of "flowery" words and the like, I dunno mang.
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Meh I meant to post last night... But I couldn't find anything really wrong with it.. It was near perfect in my opinion.. The escort thing had me confused for a bit... Cuz I thought you initially took the little namek to a store to get you some smokes... Then realized the whole point of being late... and i actually understood it
Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've become a really great writer
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