[C&C] Belle

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Just realized she looks like the girl from Kingdom Hearts which also earns you some of my time. xD <3 you

I'll read it tonight and give you my thoughts.

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This is in response to Hosu's Attack.

I suppose you like honesty when people give you feedback. I'll admit my first reaction was "Whoa, that was some weird stuff." I loved it. Like always your writing brings me into your world and doesn't let me go until I've finished. The post inside the RoSaT with the creeping blood was splendid. It really had me on the edge of my seat. You really managed to convey the fear in such a way that let me, as the reader, experience it as well. As for your ending post, that was a twist I didn't expect. Based off of your signature I gathered that it was going to be an end result. I was pleasantly surprised.

Good stuff, Belle. Keep going!