Joining Application

[The Not Cool Not Tapion]

You need to learn to write how we do. Look at examples in the roleplaying boards. Use quotations and description. You are writing like a script. Like this.


Instead of

Monster ( cudn't think of a name ): Give me food

You could make it this:

A growl escaped the oversized mouth of the large monster. It's gaping mouth opened as he roared with the most ferocious tone he could muster, "Give me food!"

Or something to that extent. Keep it in one thread, too.