Gokua Time!

[Hellfighter 17]

Eh. You need to work on your description. There's some in there, but it's lacking. Also, we use novel style for speech, so instead of

[Makio[ ?Hey, are you that alien, Gokua??

you'd go

Makio looked over to the blonde warrior, confused. "Hey, are you that alien?" he inquired, curious about his foe's origins.

You're alright to go, though. Register and someone will activate you. Your training password will be 'qwerty,' change it ASAP. Also, you need to pick three best moves and your starting planet.

[Hellfighter 17]

Yer welcome.