Frieza (New RP Version)

[Freiza]

Name:: Frieza
Fighting Style:: Ruthless, but ruthless
Email:: deathnote123@live.com
Starting Moves::
Death Ball
Death Beam
Death Punch

Roleplay Example::
Frieza shouted, "Death Ball!". The ball of energy shot at the last buliding, and it crumbled at it's power. Frieza laughed mercilessly. He looked around, and there was one human left. Charging furiously at him. Frieza meerly flipped him behind his back. He laughed sadistically, and cried, "Death Beam!". The beam shot out and peireced the human in the chest. Frieza laughed again and flew in the air. He looked at the destroyed city...it had crumbled beneath his power in seconds. He took one final glance, of sympathy? No, of evil, at the city and flew away, not knowing what his next journey would contain. He started to look away, but...there was one last human to kill
"Damn you!' The woman cried. Frieza flew down and punched her into the stomach. Then he shot the death beam....and killed her easily. He laughed nd flew away...

His evil would spread throughout the galaxy/



EDIT by Bardock: Re-posted from here.

[Freiza]

but....could he take over the world as he planned? His main goal was to take over the world....no the universe. But...he needed help. He set out to find some minions, to help him.

[Kirano]

You need to work on your spelling and gramma, which includes putting fullstops in the right places. You'll only get better overtime.

I'll set a roster for you. Welcome to the RPG.

[Bardock]

Apologies that your account was deleted. Please re-register.

[Freiza]

Okay, I have re registered, and am ready to start RPing!

[Bardock]

You shouldn't have been accepted, because your role-play is not up to our writing standards and it's only 152 words. Our minimum requirement is 300. Rewrite the role-play with fixed grammar and spelling that is 300 words. If you can do that, then we'll accept you.

And, no, you cannot have Frieza take over the world. Maybe with staff permission and a hell of a lot of good role-playing, you can have some kind of influence on a planet. But definitely not until then.

So go ahead and rewrite your role-play for me.



Actually, forget about joining, Austin.