C&C on my characters begining

[Kazuya]

Well, I just got done reading most of it, so far, I think it's pretty awesome. I like what you're doing with him. The one main thing that you need to work on is spelling, and for that I just reccomend that you spell check before you post it, and then reread it after you post, if you find a spelling mistake, feel free to edit. But other than that...8.5/10 Great job!


PS> If you got a pic that you would like made into an avatar or siggie, email it to me, and I'll see what I can whip up for ya.