03-13-2005, 12:59 AM
Yeah you did good 13.
I laughed hard on that one. Good stuff.
But yeah, like Furiza said, it kinda wound down a bit at the end. It was really good at the start, but sort of got quiet at the end. Try and come up with some new development besides just more fighting at the end. It would keep the post more engaging and interesting. I thought I was really good though. Better than what I did in my opinion.
Quote:"You don't have the slightest fuck what you just said."
I laughed hard on that one. Good stuff.
But yeah, like Furiza said, it kinda wound down a bit at the end. It was really good at the start, but sort of got quiet at the end. Try and come up with some new development besides just more fighting at the end. It would keep the post more engaging and interesting. I thought I was really good though. Better than what I did in my opinion.

