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"Mary Sue"
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04-01-2009, 02:51 AM
Bil Baer Jaxx Wrote:Oh, she only got the first book. She finished that shit in like 2 days, so proud of her.

She will never reach book 3! >=(

*psycho overprotective uncle bullshit mode*

There is also a lot of grammar errors, poorly structured sentences, and improper use of words.

I wouldn't let he read more, you might damage her ability to function properly in society.
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"Mary Sue" - by Kami - 03-27-2009, 09:07 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Belle Hibiki - 03-27-2009, 09:14 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 03-27-2009, 10:13 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 03-27-2009, 10:38 PM
"Mary Sue" - by John Doe - 03-28-2009, 12:04 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Belle Hibiki - 03-28-2009, 12:09 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Sigfried Hunin - 03-28-2009, 12:38 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Piper Juunanagou - 03-28-2009, 12:46 AM
"Mary Sue" - by John Doe - 03-28-2009, 03:30 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Pinky - 03-28-2009, 04:07 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Belle Hibiki - 03-28-2009, 04:49 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Sage - 03-28-2009, 04:58 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-28-2009, 05:19 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 03-28-2009, 04:45 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Szar - 03-28-2009, 05:15 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Waffuru - 03-28-2009, 05:52 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-28-2009, 06:36 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 03-28-2009, 06:39 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Sage - 03-28-2009, 07:02 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 03-28-2009, 07:11 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-28-2009, 09:27 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 03-28-2009, 09:34 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Saz - 03-28-2009, 09:41 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 03-28-2009, 09:43 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kami - 03-29-2009, 01:17 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 03-29-2009, 01:45 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-29-2009, 02:01 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 03-29-2009, 02:39 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-29-2009, 02:45 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Rose - 03-29-2009, 02:51 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Pinky - 03-29-2009, 04:41 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Alura - 03-29-2009, 06:14 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-29-2009, 10:51 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Josh - 03-31-2009, 09:17 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 03-31-2009, 11:19 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 03-31-2009, 12:29 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Josh - 03-31-2009, 03:16 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Sigfried Hunin - 03-31-2009, 05:27 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Sigfried Hunin - 03-31-2009, 05:52 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 03-31-2009, 06:10 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Belle Hibiki - 03-31-2009, 06:44 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Jack - 03-31-2009, 06:51 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Ashe - 03-31-2009, 07:08 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kami - 03-31-2009, 07:25 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Belle Hibiki - 03-31-2009, 07:37 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Jack - 03-31-2009, 08:59 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Rem-13 - 03-31-2009, 09:10 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Jack - 03-31-2009, 09:25 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Pinky - 03-31-2009, 10:58 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Josh - 03-31-2009, 11:19 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Jack - 03-31-2009, 11:58 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 04-01-2009, 12:51 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Dehan - 04-01-2009, 01:51 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Jack - 04-01-2009, 02:03 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Vad - 04-01-2009, 02:30 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Josh - 04-01-2009, 02:51 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Rose - 04-01-2009, 02:34 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 04-01-2009, 05:32 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Rose - 04-01-2009, 05:48 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kami - 04-01-2009, 06:13 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Rose - 04-01-2009, 06:16 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kami - 04-01-2009, 06:19 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 04-01-2009, 08:04 PM
"Mary Sue" - by John Doe - 04-01-2009, 08:15 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 04-01-2009, 08:16 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 04-01-2009, 08:19 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 04-01-2009, 08:23 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 04-01-2009, 08:24 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 04-01-2009, 08:25 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kazuya - 04-01-2009, 08:41 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Pinky - 04-01-2009, 09:10 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Rose - 04-01-2009, 09:17 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Sage - 04-01-2009, 09:33 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Rose - 04-01-2009, 09:47 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Alura - 04-01-2009, 10:15 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Piper Juunanagou - 04-01-2009, 10:29 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Kaden - 04-01-2009, 10:33 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Juno - 04-01-2009, 10:44 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Jack - 04-02-2009, 12:00 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Vad - 04-02-2009, 01:17 AM
"Mary Sue" - by Orion - 04-03-2009, 02:14 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Sigfried Hunin - 04-03-2009, 03:11 PM
"Mary Sue" - by Sigfried Hunin - 04-03-2009, 03:13 PM

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