"Mary Sue"

[Jack]

Bil Baer Jaxx isn't a character: he's you, or you as you'd like to be. He is so impossibly hip that he has difficulty seeing over his own pelvis; he'll probably die young, but damn, will it have been a good life. He always knew he was special, destined for great things - and probablyf made sure everyone else knew it too. He's had more than his fair share of hard knocks, and probably spends more time than he ought moaning about it. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever he gains, he's worked for.

You may have let yourself get a little too close to Bil Baer Jaxx. Maybe he's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like him and are trying to give him a free ride. Have some confidence in your writing! Bil Baer Jaxx is a good character. Give him room to be himself before you stifle him.



Score Breakdown
Mirror, Mirror 27
James Dean, James Dean... 29
Hey, Wanna See My Crown-Shaped Birthmark? 12
Angst R Us 13
Spare the Rod and Spoil the Child 6
Total: 87

Wow.