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Joining as Mikhail
#5
It's okay to have one or two minor errors in your RP. Nobody's perfect. The point is, you demonstrated the ability to write with a good enough grasp of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. The only thing I'd suggest is to not space your paragraphs so far apart.

One space just like this will do fine.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
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Joining as Mikhail - by Mikhail - 04-21-2009, 01:14 AM
Joining as Mikhail - by Mikhail - 04-21-2009, 01:22 AM
Joining as Mikhail - by Ander - 04-23-2009, 03:12 AM
Joining as Mikhail - by Mikhail - 04-23-2009, 03:10 PM
Joining as Mikhail - by Ander - 04-24-2009, 02:16 AM

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