Kattix Crashnos

[Kazuya]

Hello, Kattix!

First off, thanks for your interest in joining our RPG. We're glad you stopped by I love your application, and your roleplay and the description, however, there are a couple things that I need to point out before we can further the process of joining in our community. First, we have a set of default abilities that you need to read over, located here. The closest that I can give you for your abilities is combat teleportation in place of instant transmission, the description is as follows:

Combat Teleportation - The ability to teleport short distances in quick bursts without getting tired.

and for zero signal,

Time Stop - This ability allows the user to halt the process of time through sheer power of will. During this time, they can move around while the rest of the world remains at a stand-still. You cannot, however, launch any type of offensive attack, as this would break the focus of Time Stop.

Sorry for the inconvenience, if you would like to use these abilities, we can go ahead with the application process, but feel free to use the list I linked if you would like to change them before we officialize your character, because once you're fully accepted, you cannot change your abilities. You are limited to two abilities.

The second thing I need to point out is your trait. Although it is wonderfully described, please pick from this list what category your trait best falls under.


EDIT: Also, although your second form is fine, you will have to attain a tier powerup in order to use it.

Power-Up (Base) - This technique is granted in tiers, each one multiplying the combat ability of a warrior by a certain amount. These must be purchased in order (ie, you need Tier 1 before you can buy Tier 2). Each time a Power-Up is activated, it drains the user of some of their Power Points. A Power-Up can only be used if the character has enough PP stored.
Tier 1 - x2 - 4 PP - 75 XP
Tier 2 - x3 - 7 PP - 150 XP
Tier 3 - x4 - 10 PP - 300 XP

Power-Up (Master) - After training in the use of a Power-Up, a person finds it easier to activate. Purchasing the Master level of a Power-Up requires the corresponding Base Power-Up and replaces it. Master Power-Ups have lower PP costs, meaning they can be used more frequently.
Tier 1 - x2 - 2 PP - 50 XP
Tier 2 - x3 - 4 PP - 100 XP
Tier 3 - x4 - 6 PP - 200 XP

Once these are corrected, I would be more than happy to accept your application and welcome you to our community.


-Kazuya
The Much-Awesomer-Than-Batman-Superman-and the Incredible hulk-Combined Moderator (Or we could just say Vad instead).