[C&C] Alexander Trafford

[Alexander Trafford]

Like everyone else whose posted in this forum, i'm not looking for feedback on a particular story or a particular thread, but rather i'm looking for C&C on my writing in general, be it mechanical, stylistic, or whatever, and on my character. Pretty much the same thing everyone else in this sub-forum is asking for.

Dreams and Doorways

This is the longest personal storyline i've ever written. After rereading it i realized that the progression of the story itself is a bit confusing and i didn't do a good job of fleshing it out, but it has alot of character development throughout it.

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=25044

Juno's Storyline

Not alot here, but the beginning few posts (the ones in the introduction thread, in the school) are good examples of Trafford's character. I'm particularly proud of the first post in the saga that i made (first numbered post given, first link).

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthr...t=25885&page=1
Posts 26, 29, 39

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=25966
Post 18

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=26005
Posts 3, 5

Alexander Trafford v. Jonathan Meer

This is my latest bit of writing that i've taken seriously, the freshest and newest example of my character in conflict.

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=26298