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[C&C] Sage
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After the healing of Vad, Sage collapsed. I thought that was pretty cool since it was using her own life force to heal him. My main, and really only qualm is a moot one from some stand points; She doesn't talk much. This is pretty uncomfortable in retrospective, but that's not to say she's not a believable character. She's showing lots of symptoms of stress from a particular breakdown, which can lead to not talking. The thought patterns match up with that too. She's still injured from it, and I guess to talk more she'll have to get better (maybe get off anti-depressants; she's overmedicating emotional pain), or get over it, or get something. She's still a beautifully fleshed out character. *Salute*
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[C&C] Sage - by Sage - 08-03-2009, 06:23 PM
[C&C] Sage - by Jesper - 08-03-2009, 08:28 PM
[C&C] Sage - by Cain - 09-06-2009, 04:39 PM
[C&C] Sage - by Kaden - 09-07-2009, 02:28 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Kaden - 09-10-2009, 10:52 PM
[C&C] Sage - by Sage - 09-11-2009, 12:11 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Vad - 09-11-2009, 12:43 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Cain - 10-03-2009, 06:26 PM
[C&C] Sage - by Sage - 12-17-2009, 02:07 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Vad - 12-17-2009, 02:08 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Jesper - 12-17-2009, 03:15 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Sage - 12-27-2009, 07:56 AM
[C&C] Sage - by Ander - 04-25-2010, 07:51 AM

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