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opinion needed...
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i was just wondering if anyone can look at my Off To Earth bit on Vegeta and tell me what they think. I know it's only three posts, but i'd like to know where I can improve and where I did good.
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opinion needed... - by Hellfighter 17 - 09-01-2004, 02:08 AM
opinion needed... - by Hellfighter 17 - 09-01-2004, 02:38 AM
opinion needed... - by Sage - 09-01-2004, 02:39 AM
opinion needed... - by Tamsin - 09-01-2004, 02:28 PM
opinion needed... - by Tamsin - 09-01-2004, 06:44 PM
opinion needed... - by Rem-13 - 09-01-2004, 07:00 PM
opinion needed... - by Abel - 09-01-2004, 09:11 PM
opinion needed... - by Alura - 09-01-2004, 09:24 PM

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