09-01-2004, 02:08 AM
i was just wondering if anyone can look at my Off To Earth bit on Vegeta and tell me what they think. I know it's only three posts, but i'd like to know where I can improve and where I did good.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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