[C&C] Belle

[Orion]

One thing that I feel I should point out, though, is that to call Blaze a "murderer" (for this saga, at least) is technically untrue. I'm sorry if my writing didn't make that clear. Blaze was supposed to have alluded to having 'dealt with' the guards, and - after provoking Hibiki into an attack (which separated Hibiki and Kaden) - reveal that the guards had run away. If Blaze had actually killed anyone, you would have seen a lot less compassion from Belle at the end of that fight.

Yeah I realised that, it was illustrated in your roleplay, I just forgot to mention that when I wrote the critique. I was going to say something like "and then when he found out they weren't dead, his rage faded away."

Thank you again for the comments and critiques. It always feels great to know that you're actually being read, and I should really start returning the favor.

No problem. It was a great read.