11-10-2009, 10:39 PM
7/10
It's not Mino, I'll give you that. But it's almost a whole new style from it. You gave a small, yet slightly detailed reason of his thoughts of being here. It was descriptive, and nicely done as well.
Criticism: Well all you did was drink a bit of liquor and smoke. No action. It was bland, I guess, but still very well written.
Kill me: http://cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.php?p=...ostcount=7
It's not Mino, I'll give you that. But it's almost a whole new style from it. You gave a small, yet slightly detailed reason of his thoughts of being here. It was descriptive, and nicely done as well.
Criticism: Well all you did was drink a bit of liquor and smoke. No action. It was bland, I guess, but still very well written.
Kill me: http://cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.php?p=...ostcount=7
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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've become a really great writer