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3rd COMBAT DAY
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11-24-2009, 01:27 AM (This post was last modified: 11-24-2009, 01:28 AM by Kaden.)
Posted. I tried to include the effect of the drugs in the tone of the writing, rather than blatantly use them as a mechanic (the exception of the last line). Hopefully that comes across.

Please let me know if I did anything out of line, Trafford.
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3rd COMBAT DAY - by DA 2009 - 11-23-2009, 08:09 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Ashe - 11-23-2009, 08:13 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by DA 2009 - 11-23-2009, 08:14 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by DA 2009 - 11-23-2009, 08:39 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Ashe - 11-23-2009, 08:50 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by DA 2009 - 11-23-2009, 08:55 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Kaden - 11-23-2009, 09:13 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Ashe - 11-23-2009, 09:22 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Tamsin - 11-23-2009, 09:40 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Mal Nova - 11-23-2009, 02:03 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Alexander Trafford - 11-23-2009, 02:32 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Kaden - 11-23-2009, 07:53 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Alexander Trafford - 11-23-2009, 09:45 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Shun - 11-23-2009, 11:20 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Vad - 11-23-2009, 11:34 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Kaden - 11-23-2009, 11:37 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Shun - 11-23-2009, 11:48 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Ashe - 11-23-2009, 11:52 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Kaden - 11-24-2009, 01:27 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Sage - 11-24-2009, 06:00 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by DA 2009 - 11-24-2009, 06:03 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Vad - 11-24-2009, 06:04 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Mal Nova - 11-24-2009, 11:40 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Jesper - 11-24-2009, 03:22 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Sage - 11-24-2009, 08:12 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Tamsin - 11-24-2009, 08:25 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Mal Nova - 11-24-2009, 08:44 PM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Mal Nova - 11-25-2009, 03:32 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by DA 2009 - 11-25-2009, 08:01 AM
3rd COMBAT DAY - by Belle Hibiki - 11-25-2009, 11:00 AM

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