12-17-2009, 03:10 PM
One thing I would change: remove the possibility of fighting Hollywood (or the strongest, wtfpwning NPC at the time) so freaking early. I know that the odds were against getting him, but...that sucks soooo much. xD
One thing I would keep: I definitely like how you made the saga so...personal. It didn't feel like you generalized anything or left anyone out, really. The teleporter posts were awesome, and the casual mentions of the characters in the Control Room posts were cool as well. So...yeah, definitely keep making efforts to involve everyone in your next saga as you did here.
One thing I would keep: I definitely like how you made the saga so...personal. It didn't feel like you generalized anything or left anyone out, really. The teleporter posts were awesome, and the casual mentions of the characters in the Control Room posts were cool as well. So...yeah, definitely keep making efforts to involve everyone in your next saga as you did here.