02-18-2010, 01:08 AM
I appreciate the words of praise Cain. The moment you're thinking of would be Vad falling into an old catacomb and getting ripped apart by the piles of lizards falling on him.
That particular quote regarding Trixie brings to mind a plan I have to throw a major thorn into their relationship. I haven't revealed, in detail, why Vad met her or why he even cared enough to choose her.
For those of you following me when I write. You'll enjoy that story. I guarantee it.
Anyway,
I'm easily entertained. For those of you I have read, I like your writing. Some more than others, but that isn't quality or style; it's my taste in story telling I guess. (Weird right?)
Kaden's comical approach to Kaden (lol wut), his character, draws my attention and him and Belle (as characters) meld very well. Belle as a character is an adventure to read. I feel like I'm playing an RPG when reading his writing and I find myself getting lost in the tale he's spinning. Ace Combat (Trafford) intrigues my desire for realism. His character's problems and addictions give me the taste of real world application to our powers that I desire from time to time. Sage's writing and depiction of events puts me into a well written movie or screen play. He melds Sage's point of view with everything around her while keeping the people around him resonating within his writing.
To me, my writing is a heavy dog fight like the Battle of Britain. It's chaotic and unpredictable. I tend to focus on action and emotion more than description. Sometimes I'm fine with it, sometimes I'm not. I'm learning as I write more and more. *thumbs up*
As a note. Just because I didn't mention someone here doesn't I mean I did not read your writing or think you're not worth reading. I just haven't gotten to you yet. Keep up the good work Chubbs.
<3
That particular quote regarding Trixie brings to mind a plan I have to throw a major thorn into their relationship. I haven't revealed, in detail, why Vad met her or why he even cared enough to choose her.
For those of you following me when I write. You'll enjoy that story. I guarantee it.
Anyway,
I'm easily entertained. For those of you I have read, I like your writing. Some more than others, but that isn't quality or style; it's my taste in story telling I guess. (Weird right?)
Kaden's comical approach to Kaden (lol wut), his character, draws my attention and him and Belle (as characters) meld very well. Belle as a character is an adventure to read. I feel like I'm playing an RPG when reading his writing and I find myself getting lost in the tale he's spinning. Ace Combat (Trafford) intrigues my desire for realism. His character's problems and addictions give me the taste of real world application to our powers that I desire from time to time. Sage's writing and depiction of events puts me into a well written movie or screen play. He melds Sage's point of view with everything around her while keeping the people around him resonating within his writing.
To me, my writing is a heavy dog fight like the Battle of Britain. It's chaotic and unpredictable. I tend to focus on action and emotion more than description. Sometimes I'm fine with it, sometimes I'm not. I'm learning as I write more and more. *thumbs up*
As a note. Just because I didn't mention someone here doesn't I mean I did not read your writing or think you're not worth reading. I just haven't gotten to you yet. Keep up the good work Chubbs.
<3
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