[C&C] Cain

[Victoria]

At some points it was hard to understand what was going on, but maybe that's because I'm not very good at reading other peoples writing. ^^

Does Sven purposely talk like that? If not, it's hard to get what he's talking about.

I got the gist of the RP, and overall you have great ideas going on here. You definitely have a grasp on inner character development, and that's important.

I can't wait to see what happens with your character, would be pretty cool if he could be a dragon.