02-26-2010, 02:20 AM
Hey. So, I'm back, and, quite hopefully, permanently.
So, I've posted two new topics in the past week, and I'm not exactly happy with them, so I'm not asking for C&C on them. They were, quite basically, my attempt to jump back into writing Juno. I'm asking for a C&C of the original (and, in my opinion, most solid) Juno, the one from FOF3, mainly, as well as Revolution and Reformation. Obviously, the new topics didn't work, so I'm sitting down now and evaluating where Juno stands, getting a grasp on where he is and where I want him to go.
I'd like some feedback, what's solid and what needs to be worked on, where I personally can improve as a writer, and where the character can improve to be more believable.
So, I've posted two new topics in the past week, and I'm not exactly happy with them, so I'm not asking for C&C on them. They were, quite basically, my attempt to jump back into writing Juno. I'm asking for a C&C of the original (and, in my opinion, most solid) Juno, the one from FOF3, mainly, as well as Revolution and Reformation. Obviously, the new topics didn't work, so I'm sitting down now and evaluating where Juno stands, getting a grasp on where he is and where I want him to go.
I'd like some feedback, what's solid and what needs to be worked on, where I personally can improve as a writer, and where the character can improve to be more believable.