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[C&C] Piper J.
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I read your most recent post. The prose is really good, really descriptive. My only qualm with Piper is a lack of dialogue for her (and supporting cast). It might've just been that post though. The military persona Kaden mentioned is apparent too, which makes for a fun to read character.

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Your post made a Jill Valentine-esque character apparent in your signature.
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[C&C] Piper J. - by Piper Juunanagou - 02-26-2010, 01:22 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Kaden - 02-26-2010, 02:06 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Cain - 02-26-2010, 02:39 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Piper Juunanagou - 02-26-2010, 04:20 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Orsalis - 07-05-2010, 12:07 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Piper Juunanagou - 09-20-2010, 06:43 PM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Victoria - 02-05-2011, 10:43 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Kaden - 02-06-2011, 06:40 AM
[C&C] Piper J. - by Piper Juunanagou - 02-09-2011, 04:21 AM

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