[C&C] Veritas

[Veritas]

Its been a while since I've been doing this so I was curious as to what people think about my writing and such. Try to keep in mind I'm trying to get back into the swing of things so dont be too hard on me haha, but I can definitely use some criticism and some suggestions on how to improve. Here's the link, I didn't pick a specific post I'll leave that up to you guys.

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=26511