03-03-2010, 01:39 AM
So, most of you know how this works, but for those who don't, this is kind of a give-and-take thing. Someone posts a post -- only a saga post -- that they want criticism on, and then another person writes a critique (constructive, please) and offers up a post of their own, which the next person crits, offers up their post, and so on.
Since I'm an opportunist I'm totally skirting the C&C someone else fee this time, haha, losers. xD I'd like my join post critiqued, it's a model of how I'm planning to write for the saga, so if there are any issues, chinks, I need to know now, haha. Thanks in advance: "[00] Now Entering Kill Town" - Juno.
Since I'm an opportunist I'm totally skirting the C&C someone else fee this time, haha, losers. xD I'd like my join post critiqued, it's a model of how I'm planning to write for the saga, so if there are any issues, chinks, I need to know now, haha. Thanks in advance: "[00] Now Entering Kill Town" - Juno.