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Kill Town - C&C
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03-03-2010, 03:11 AM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2010, 03:12 AM by Vad.)
I enjoyed it. I liked how I could grasp a good sense of how Juno was feeling while I was reading. Compared to your old writing, this had more feeling and emotion in it. I'm just curious as to why it got pessimistic toward the end.


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Fighting to the bitter end is an advantage when your opponent does not wish to perish.
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Kill Town - C&C - by Juno - 03-03-2010, 01:39 AM
Kill Town - C&C - by Vad - 03-03-2010, 03:11 AM
Kill Town - C&C - by Victoria - 03-07-2010, 12:35 AM
Kill Town - C&C - by Cain - 03-10-2010, 01:23 AM
Kill Town - C&C - by Alexander Trafford - 03-14-2010, 03:50 PM

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